Recent Comments

3/18/20, 7:14 PM
@TheCraftsman Squealing like a fan girl right now! ;-)
3/18/20, 6:38 PM
I must thank Andrew58484971 for pointing out a mistake in boot camps; hopefully he'll become my advisor in military matters. @garpe97: Mucho gracias por tu comentario. Estoy muy contento de que te haya gustado mi historia. @Hypnothrill: Again thank you for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the motto change. In the original symbiote stories, Peter is slowly corrupted by the symbiote; I think that I'm following that line. I don't think they would be changed all at once; it would be a gradual corruption. I think as they bring more recruits into the symbiote and send them off, that's where we'll see corruption. I myself like the more subtle corruption that they still maintain the military decorum and protocol but carry it out for the symbiote. I would love to have your opinion on how to do that better (to have you sign off on things would be a big win in my book).
3/18/20, 6:33 PM
I really did like that "Semper fidelis ad symbiote" moment. And of course, you should write the kind of thing that turns you on, New Guy in Town. But for my personal tastes, I'd really love to see a clearer personality change as these soldiers get corrupted by the symbiote, lose their old loyalties, and get turned on by betraying their old comrades.
Anonymous
3/18/20, 6:30 PM
Beauuutiful descriptions and fucking sexy!!
garpe97
3/18/20, 5:29 PM
Perdona por escribir mi comentario en español, espero no tengas problemas, pero me resulta más fácil felicitarte por tu historia. Acabo de leerla y estoy muy cachondo y estoy seguro de que la continuación será igual de buena. Enhorabuena por tu trabajo y espero con ansia el siguiente capítulo.
3/18/20, 5:09 PM
Well, this look very interesting! Albeit, given the fact that it's Eris, I expect things to blow up at Al's face soon.
3/18/20, 4:57 PM
I am The Craftsman from Tumblr yes.
3/18/20, 3:37 PM
The legend of transformation comes baaaack!?
3/18/20, 3:35 PM
Ooh, mpreg would be cool!
3/18/20, 3:25 PM
Thank you for your comments so far. @Jeep: Thank you for the support of and enthusiasm for the story. I'm equally excited to see where your Machine story goes. @Anonymous: Thank you for the support. I'll try to keep things up but I think I'm trying to create as complete a story as possible. But I have to tailor things. @Hypnothrill: First let me say thank you for reading and commenting on my work. I'm a fan of your work (some of which I contacted you about using for stories), so I'm honored by you reaching out to comment. I'm glad to take the "wholesome" moniker; for me, the turn on is about the mind control (and/or transformation) and not necessarily the sex. So with that in mind, to use your example, what would this sentence do for you? "A grin formed on Ryan's face as he imagined all the guardsmen on his base standing at attention, wearing the black symbiote suit." I think elements of that are there in what I've written: Ryan saying he wants to spread the symbiote to other guardsmen and Theo changing the Marines' motto to Semper fidelis ad symbiote and the Marines responding in the affirmative Marine fashion. But they may not come across so directly. I would definitely love to hear more of your opinion on the story, so please feel free to contact me on the forum.