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Anonymous
3/18/20, 9:51 PM
Fox in the muscle house!
Mdlftr
3/18/20, 9:40 PM
Interesting! I know that the reference to fox tails means that Kobi is a trickster spirit. He's a kitsune: Kitsune (狐, キツネ, IPA: [kitsɯne] (About this soundlisten)) in the literal sense is the Japanese word for fox. Foxes are a common subject of Japanese folklore; in English, kitsune refers to them in this context. Stories depict legendary foxes as intelligent beings and as possessing paranormal abilities that increase with their age and wisdom. According to Yōkai folklore, all foxes have the ability to shapeshift into human form. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kitsune#:~:text= I look forward to where this goes next--
3/18/20, 9:35 PM
I agree with hypnotrill to add more sex related parts to the story. That is just my taste though! Would love to read more!
Ssheldon
3/18/20, 9:35 PM
I would love to exprience this. Hot story!
3/18/20, 8:47 PM
I have plans for Sam, don't worry
Anonymous
3/18/20, 8:03 PM
It's getting there. Should be interesting once we arrive.
Anonymous
3/18/20, 8:03 PM
Vs Sam as a crude, blue-collar redneck? Pleeeease???
Anonymous
3/18/20, 7:30 PM
Awesome stuff here.
3/18/20, 7:14 PM
@TheCraftsman Squealing like a fan girl right now! ;-)
3/18/20, 6:38 PM
I must thank Andrew58484971 for pointing out a mistake in boot camps; hopefully he'll become my advisor in military matters. @garpe97: Mucho gracias por tu comentario. Estoy muy contento de que te haya gustado mi historia. @Hypnothrill: Again thank you for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the motto change. In the original symbiote stories, Peter is slowly corrupted by the symbiote; I think that I'm following that line. I don't think they would be changed all at once; it would be a gradual corruption. I think as they bring more recruits into the symbiote and send them off, that's where we'll see corruption. I myself like the more subtle corruption that they still maintain the military decorum and protocol but carry it out for the symbiote. I would love to have your opinion on how to do that better (to have you sign off on things would be a big win in my book).