Recent Comments

3/18/20, 5:09 PM
Well, this look very interesting! Albeit, given the fact that it's Eris, I expect things to blow up at Al's face soon.
3/18/20, 4:57 PM
I am The Craftsman from Tumblr yes.
3/18/20, 3:37 PM
The legend of transformation comes baaaack!?
3/18/20, 3:35 PM
Ooh, mpreg would be cool!
3/18/20, 3:25 PM
Thank you for your comments so far. @Jeep: Thank you for the support of and enthusiasm for the story. I'm equally excited to see where your Machine story goes. @Anonymous: Thank you for the support. I'll try to keep things up but I think I'm trying to create as complete a story as possible. But I have to tailor things. @Hypnothrill: First let me say thank you for reading and commenting on my work. I'm a fan of your work (some of which I contacted you about using for stories), so I'm honored by you reaching out to comment. I'm glad to take the "wholesome" moniker; for me, the turn on is about the mind control (and/or transformation) and not necessarily the sex. So with that in mind, to use your example, what would this sentence do for you? "A grin formed on Ryan's face as he imagined all the guardsmen on his base standing at attention, wearing the black symbiote suit." I think elements of that are there in what I've written: Ryan saying he wants to spread the symbiote to other guardsmen and Theo changing the Marines' motto to Semper fidelis ad symbiote and the Marines responding in the affirmative Marine fashion. But they may not come across so directly. I would definitely love to hear more of your opinion on the story, so please feel free to contact me on the forum.
3/18/20, 3:07 PM
More, please!
3/18/20, 2:45 PM
will this story continue?
Bostonboy97
3/18/20, 1:39 PM
Wow. I had forgotten about this series, and I'm kicking myself for that now. Amazing continuation, cant wait to see what comes next. Just wish I was trapped in this cave instead of being at home right now.
3/18/20, 1:11 PM
Great story! love to see more of it! Is your name a coincidence or are you THE Craftsman, one of the greatest tf-writers ever on tumblr?
3/18/20, 12:56 PM
"Wholesome" is a good word for it. I love the premise of this story; I just keep wanting to see more mental corruption and personality change as the soldiers are recruited into the symbiote's army. The converts just seem a little too much like normal soldiers for my taste, and I keep wanting to see a sentence like, "An evil grin formed on Ryan's face and a big tent formed in the crotch of his BDUs as he imagined all the soldiers on his base standing at attention, totally naked and hard except for the symbiote that clung to their bodies like a skintight black rubber suit."