Recent Comments

nycboot
3/16/20, 7:56 PM
Gee, that sequence where Slave was taking control was very scary! I actually had difficulty reading it because it was so painful from Hector's point of view. In this version of the story Hector is the protagonist but, as I and others have commented previously, he's not all that smart. He's going to have to really smarten up if he wants to allow slave to have deep feelings for him.
Anonymous
3/16/20, 7:44 PM
Great story. Hope there is more of it soon.
Thames
3/16/20, 5:34 PM
The first reader who didn't like the story misses the point: it's fiction! Disregard the narrow view and keep on. I thought it was great. It's not my type of fantasy but it was well written, well paced and one felt the conflict. Good work!
Ng5hvlo4
3/16/20, 3:24 PM
so hot how the situation turned around a few times before master reestablished control. looking forward to seeing the slaves reorientation and further fall to subservience.
Anonymous
3/16/20, 3:04 PM
I love this story thaannk you
3/16/20, 2:09 PM
Thought this story was great. Loved every bit of it
Anonymous
3/16/20, 7:00 AM
Loved it
3/16/20, 5:59 AM
That is enough incentive for me to join a gym
3/16/20, 4:16 AM
honestly this is becoming one of my favorite stories on here, and personally I'm hoping for much more as well as the father being turned into a slave too. I've always been partial to a father and son slave duo. Can't wait to see what's in store
Anonymous
3/16/20, 4:01 AM
clever, sweet, and well written! what more could i ask for?