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3/15/20, 11:26 PM
An interesting take on the nanobot conversion; it just leaves the questions of what is making all the men into these hive controlled body builders and why unanswered. Any chance you go on and expand the story out to get into that?
3/15/20, 8:50 PM
Neds to continue, Hot!
3/15/20, 8:45 PM
Really sexy twists of fate all throughout this series, and I love seeing how Blake's empathy evaporated as his mindset changed. Great work as usual.
Anonymous
3/15/20, 7:43 PM
Oh man this is beautiful. I can't wait to see how it progresses when he gets more military and cops under his control it's gonna be amazing!
3/15/20, 6:56 PM
Hector is evidence that even really smart people overlook really simple things. Lots of new sessions with the overmind, but none of them so far ever explicitly mentioning Hector. Ivan is learning very well how to serve "a master". My money is on Hector getting "better dealed" either in part 7 or soon after, very likely by Marcus, since Ivan now has explicit permission to see him again.
Scott
3/15/20, 6:47 PM
Agreed, I'd love for him to end up like a small dicked humiliated twink
Anonymous
3/15/20, 6:46 PM
terrific
Mdlftr
3/15/20, 5:30 PM
douchebroness - my new favorite word! Well done humorous social commentary on the dating scene!
3/15/20, 5:29 PM
If the entire point is sex change them he could become a semi twinky femboi, fully male but with some feminine features. I like the idea of both becoming good boys for Rick who stays in charge and as a dom top.
Mdlftr
3/15/20, 5:22 PM
Terrific writing, Derek! This passage really summed it up from Blake's perspective: More than anything, I wanted to go and live a little bit of the life I saw on the internet. It seemed like the whole world was full of gay dudes heading out to bars, dancing their sparkling asses off, hooking up, fucking like wild men, and doing it all again the next night. I knew I could look like those guys if I wanted to. I’m a total gym rat, one of the many ways I’ve figured out to focus on something other than my dick. And sure, the gym is full of muscled up guys who I’d kill to have a shot with, but I just throw on a ball cap and look angry. Everyone stays out of my way. Then I go home and jerk off til my dick hurts. It’s a system that’s been working for me. I didn’t want to be scared anymore though.