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Anonymous
3/14/20, 9:50 PM
Excellent work
The_Supernatural_D
3/14/20, 9:13 PM
Whoops, I forgot to say that I really loved your "Silverclad" series and I'm excited to see that you're uploading again!
rodready
3/14/20, 8:57 PM
Respect Mr Williams, always a pleasure
3/14/20, 7:07 PM
Thank you for all the support; I have to send a big thanks out to Nacho, who's been a sounding board and a good person overall for getting me to the point to put the story up. @Rubberboy229: I liked what Hypnocigarboy wrote and I'm glad that you like my ideas for far. I hadn't really planned on taking over the school, but it could be a side story that some of the non-military characters brought in could go down. I'll definitely keep that in mind as I proceed. @Lexorius: That's definitely on the way, so keep looking out for that. @VenomControl: I'll try to do my best, but life is busy. @Anonymous: Adding the Defenders or other non-major heroic characters is an interesting angle; I'll definitely have to think about that. Since Theo (our protagonist; his name will appear in the next chapter) is mainly focused on military and police, I'm not too sure how I would work sexual types into the story. He's not considering who people sleep with; he sees everyone being bonded with the symbiote as his task, with his focus on military and police as his main goal. (There are some scenes that will make that clear coming up.)
3/14/20, 6:15 PM
cant wait for the next challenges. and for Pine's dominant side
rkgks
3/14/20, 5:22 PM
Love the muscle growth. Like others, not biggest fan of baby talk. I loved the description of his new hero costume, and the dumbing down/obliviousness. Looking forward to another chapter. :-)
Anonymous
3/14/20, 4:58 PM
moooooooooooooore
Anonymous
3/14/20, 4:53 PM
Really glad you continued this! Honestly it would be great to hear about the night from Blake's perspective too.
Anonymous
3/14/20, 4:01 PM
Part 1 was from Jeff's perspective.
Anonymous
3/14/20, 3:51 PM
Try adding freelance heroes like Punisher or Luke Cage. To other normies like Homophobic body builders, to handsome yet closet gays. Slowly climb it on top.