Recent Comments

3/15/20, 1:34 AM
This story was so fun and creative. I love the whole game scene as well too
Anonymous
3/15/20, 12:07 AM
I LOVE the nerd transformation - please spend at least half a chapter on how he acts differently now, how people treat him differently, his grooming/shaving routine (no more facial hair for him I guess). thank you for this amazing series
3/14/20, 11:25 PM
i wish this was continued. the story is so good.
3/14/20, 11:25 PM
i wish this was continued. the story is so good.
3/14/20, 11:00 PM
love language of inter racial theme, very authentic
Anonymous
3/14/20, 9:50 PM
Excellent work
The_Supernatural_D
3/14/20, 9:13 PM
Whoops, I forgot to say that I really loved your "Silverclad" series and I'm excited to see that you're uploading again!
rodready
3/14/20, 8:57 PM
Respect Mr Williams, always a pleasure
3/14/20, 7:07 PM
Thank you for all the support; I have to send a big thanks out to Nacho, who's been a sounding board and a good person overall for getting me to the point to put the story up. @Rubberboy229: I liked what Hypnocigarboy wrote and I'm glad that you like my ideas for far. I hadn't really planned on taking over the school, but it could be a side story that some of the non-military characters brought in could go down. I'll definitely keep that in mind as I proceed. @Lexorius: That's definitely on the way, so keep looking out for that. @VenomControl: I'll try to do my best, but life is busy. @Anonymous: Adding the Defenders or other non-major heroic characters is an interesting angle; I'll definitely have to think about that. Since Theo (our protagonist; his name will appear in the next chapter) is mainly focused on military and police, I'm not too sure how I would work sexual types into the story. He's not considering who people sleep with; he sees everyone being bonded with the symbiote as his task, with his focus on military and police as his main goal. (There are some scenes that will make that clear coming up.)
3/14/20, 6:15 PM
cant wait for the next challenges. and for Pine's dominant side