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Mdlftr
3/15/20, 4:44 PM
Well written description of progressive mental changes and associated physical tweaks. I'll admit that I find some of the gay stereotypes tedious - the bleached platinum hair, the affected speech, the short, tight, slutty clothes -- but since this story was at least partly making fun of gay stereotypes and how (apparently) straight "bros" only know gay guys as stereotypes, the bar patrons playing on the stereotypes helped to carry out this story's satire on "how gay men act/are." Having noted that, since the narrator KNOWS what his gay friend Blake is really like, and Blake is NOTHING like the stereotypes, it was pretty obvious that the narrator's responses to the questions he got was due to the mind control taking place. Well executed story.
Anonymous
3/15/20, 4:38 PM
I agree with firesix that this story is sad. That witch queen needs a taste of their own medicine.
JonMuscle
3/15/20, 2:17 PM
Right? that didnt take long! great story too! I identify as 100% gay but female to MAN stories get me rock hard!
3/15/20, 1:35 PM
more please...it is a real hot story!
Anonymous
3/15/20, 11:37 AM
Love the direction this is going in! Can't wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
3/15/20, 10:21 AM
i love that the protagonist's friend was affected and tried assimilating the protagonist. i don't see where it goes from here but a nice set-up making me interested to the next chapter. thank!!
3/15/20, 8:04 AM
Fantastic series! incredibly hot!
Anonymous
3/15/20, 5:21 AM
i'd like to see more self-aware goofy stories like this and Hey Why Are You Asking Me Questions. fun to see stories just kind of have their tongue in cheek so much
3/15/20, 5:09 AM
Excellent story you have here, would be nice for Mike to want to be Pines slave full time.
Anonymous
3/15/20, 3:27 AM
literally the hottest description of eating ass I have ever read