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heyitschase
3/13/20, 10:31 PM
This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read on here. I absolutely love the little strange turn it took. As someone who loves cock tf and slightly odd and kinky tf stories like this, its honestly perfect and I'd love to see more of these gradual, mind-fucking transformations like this one!! I love how you describe everything in detail and actually go through the thought process of how the main character feels instead of just blantantly stating what happens with no spunk (no pun intended). If you like to continues this one that'd be amazing, if not it's reached a logical conclusion. Thanks for an amazing and hot read!!
Anonymous
3/13/20, 9:11 PM
excellent work thank you
Anonymous
3/13/20, 7:02 PM
terrific
3/13/20, 6:37 PM
That was fucking hilarious. Thanks for writing it! I laughed out loud several times.
Waldgeist
3/13/20, 4:49 PM
Great Story! The last part was not 100% my favorite, but it's your story and you do very well! Only it had a little rush, maybe you can do some tune-up-stories and let us know, how Daniel fits into his new identities. :)
3/13/20, 3:34 PM
Really hot, hope you continue with more chapters!
3/13/20, 3:28 PM
I wish you would have completed
Anonymous
3/13/20, 3:05 PM
I fucking love muscle guts. This is so fucking sexy.
Anonymous
3/13/20, 1:35 PM
This is fantastic: well written, plenty of natural, sexy dialogue with each character sounding unique and funny in their own way, a perfect line between reality and fantasy that makes suspension of disbelief easy - my brain and meatstick are in agreement: so pleasurable to read, not a smutty word wasted
3/13/20, 1:02 PM
If in doubt, the original story (and Derek's comments there) make it clear what is going on here. See: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/327466