Recent Comments

3/14/20, 6:15 PM
cant wait for the next challenges. and for Pine's dominant side
rkgks
3/14/20, 5:22 PM
Love the muscle growth. Like others, not biggest fan of baby talk. I loved the description of his new hero costume, and the dumbing down/obliviousness. Looking forward to another chapter. :-)
Anonymous
3/14/20, 4:58 PM
moooooooooooooore
Anonymous
3/14/20, 4:53 PM
Really glad you continued this! Honestly it would be great to hear about the night from Blake's perspective too.
Anonymous
3/14/20, 4:01 PM
Part 1 was from Jeff's perspective.
Anonymous
3/14/20, 3:51 PM
Try adding freelance heroes like Punisher or Luke Cage. To other normies like Homophobic body builders, to handsome yet closet gays. Slowly climb it on top.
3/14/20, 3:22 PM
looking forward to this story!! please update soon!!
3/14/20, 3:10 PM
Awesome retelling! As hot as the first one. I would love to read the story from Jeff’s perspective.
3/14/20, 2:56 PM
Great follow-up! I like it even better than the first part.
Anonymous
3/14/20, 2:54 PM
awesome