Recent Comments

M
3/13/20, 2:32 AM
Wow. I did not expect this route! holy shit that got extreme, but it makes sense because you alluded to it in the previous chapter. I wonder where you might take this to in another chapter? tell of the trials of having a cock for a boyfriend? or would you Jump to 19 years from now when Ben is changed back to something more like his old self? would Mid Life Crisis Darren even keep to his original notion? On the other hand, I kind of would like to see an alternate ending where Ben makes the additional change that Darren reciprocates his feelings, but he does it badly, like under self 'Obsessed with Ben', or where he takes out all the scholastic boring aspects of Darren when Darren starts to ignore him again. Suddenly Darren doesn't know what to do with this mess of wires in his room, and does Ben wanna play Call of Duty? Ben realizes that he just erased Darren's career, so he makes a few more changes to make Darren as carefree and bro as Ben is. While liking to suck his cock of course. which brings me to a point of clarification, Ben went in and changed Darren's perceptions about his throat, lips, and asshole, but doesn't that mean that he still considers his face a face pussy? I kind of like it, even if the idea of that is a little off putting just because i never thought of a face like that before. it'd be funny to me if he just, never remembered that he did that and Darren forever more thinks of his face that way.
transformheaven
3/13/20, 12:01 AM
curious to see what's coming!
Baala
3/12/20, 11:50 PM
Poor Kat!
3/12/20, 11:41 PM
ok, absolutely love where you took it and delightfully surprised at how hot it is!
Jmz
3/12/20, 10:10 PM
Be hot if he became a chav, with a chavy haircut and wearing chav gear!
Feb 9, 2020
Anonymous
3/12/20, 7:40 PM
Thom, you are welcome. I have enjoyed your stories for a long time.
3/12/20, 7:38 PM
Was not expecting that, but I'm not mad. I'm hoping there will be another chapter cause this has been a great story and I hope that the professor comes around and "fixes" everything.
3/12/20, 7:01 PM
A nice start but it feels a bit rushed and there's not much character to Derek so we can't really appreciate—and he can't react to—whats been done to him. Keep it up and we'll see what happens.
johnlee88888888@yahoo.com
3/12/20, 6:20 PM
you got talent!
Beardfull1
3/12/20, 5:31 PM
Give us more on the bearish bearded guy!!!