Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/6/20, 1:11 PM
i was really impressed to see this quality of sci-fi creepiness. It is expanding the boundary of mc stories!! I enjoyed seeing an AI is taking over human freedom so naturally. It's on par with writing quality of some sci-fi masterpieces with great mc twist ;) Thanks to VIC and VICKI!! I hope to see Cameron's interactions with his Reflex mentor in the future or an sequel, too.
Anonymous
3/6/20, 12:47 PM
10/10 yet again. Totally brilliant wordplay.
Anonymous
3/6/20, 12:38 PM
I think this is probably one the best conceived, written and "stimulating" pieces I have read on this or any site. My congratulations.
Martin
3/6/20, 6:57 AM
Comment section is open again (but the author can still close it if he wants to).
3/6/20, 4:43 AM
Thanks for that series. I've looked forward coming home each night from work this week to read another chapter. Hope to see a story again soon from you.
blankbot
3/6/20, 1:56 AM
You write well and are remarkably witty.
Jerry
3/6/20, 1:24 AM
hey edlam here is jerry! Thank you for u new story!
Anonymous
3/6/20, 12:42 AM
Fourth day trying to read It's really well written and the idea is interesting, but they got stuck in the hypnosis for soooo long, I got bored. Maybe I just don't have the patience
Anonymous
3/5/20, 9:46 PM
i think the explanation is simpler than that : he never had anything to do with the project. He simply noticed that Ivan is willing to obey him. But i do agree with you that he'll exploit that knowledge.
Martin
3/5/20, 8:59 PM
I'm going to remove *all* comments about the age of the protagonist and the story being allegedly pedophilic. That also includes the replies and the ones defening the author and my decision. Anyone who want to continue the discussion can do that in the forum in [this thread](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/discussion-about-rules-and-especially-the-underage-topic/1215/23). In case you want to save some of your comments from this section, just copy them manually and put them into a posting into that thread. The comment section of this story will remain locked for a couple of hours before I delete the comments.