Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/6/20, 6:37 PM
loving the setup. looks very promising!
LongtimeFan
3/6/20, 3:32 PM
This story just keeps getting better! :D I love the little hints sprinkled throughout of VIC's more sinister side (VICKI's line "You be sure to *obey* my brother now," for example). And as others have said, it's interesting to see a type of mind control that, instead of breaking the protagonist with pain, floods him with pleasure. Affection and praise can be drugs, too. Phenomenal! :D
3/6/20, 2:36 PM
You know what if reflex was real it'd definitely have me in the bag too
Anonymous
3/6/20, 1:16 PM
How James is submitting himself to the Relflex empire and losing himself is like an irony to consumerism...
Anonymous
3/6/20, 1:11 PM
i was really impressed to see this quality of sci-fi creepiness. It is expanding the boundary of mc stories!! I enjoyed seeing an AI is taking over human freedom so naturally. It's on par with writing quality of some sci-fi masterpieces with great mc twist ;) Thanks to VIC and VICKI!! I hope to see Cameron's interactions with his Reflex mentor in the future or an sequel, too.
Anonymous
3/6/20, 12:47 PM
10/10 yet again. Totally brilliant wordplay.
Anonymous
3/6/20, 12:38 PM
I think this is probably one the best conceived, written and "stimulating" pieces I have read on this or any site. My congratulations.
Martin
3/6/20, 6:57 AM
Comment section is open again (but the author can still close it if he wants to).
3/6/20, 4:43 AM
Thanks for that series. I've looked forward coming home each night from work this week to read another chapter. Hope to see a story again soon from you.
blankbot
3/6/20, 1:56 AM
You write well and are remarkably witty.