Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/6/20, 7:39 PM
Really intriguing start. I look forward to more of the story.
Mar 6, 2020
Anonymous
3/6/20, 7:18 PM
Wow! Would never have guessed this was your first time writing for the site. Must admit I was a little worried to begin with that the story was going to be one of those ones which focuses on the specific fetish (the gloves) to the detriment of everything else. But you quickly proved me wrong :) Great writing style. Fantastic job of portraying how the subject is thinking (or NOT thinking). And damn did that cliffhanger leave me wanting to come back for more PLEASE tell me a part two is on the way
Mar 6, 2020
nycboot
3/6/20, 7:07 PM
Wonderful! And I'm not saying that because this is your first story. You so fully understand the text has to be as hypnotic as Adams himself. Dare we wish for a part 2? Again, wonderful!
3/6/20, 6:59 PM
Thank you anon! I'll hopefully have chapter 2 ready soon-ish
Anonymous
3/6/20, 6:37 PM
loving the setup. looks very promising!
LongtimeFan
3/6/20, 3:32 PM
This story just keeps getting better! :D I love the little hints sprinkled throughout of VIC's more sinister side (VICKI's line "You be sure to *obey* my brother now," for example). And as others have said, it's interesting to see a type of mind control that, instead of breaking the protagonist with pain, floods him with pleasure. Affection and praise can be drugs, too. Phenomenal! :D
3/6/20, 2:36 PM
You know what if reflex was real it'd definitely have me in the bag too
Anonymous
3/6/20, 1:16 PM
How James is submitting himself to the Relflex empire and losing himself is like an irony to consumerism...
Anonymous
3/6/20, 1:11 PM
i was really impressed to see this quality of sci-fi creepiness. It is expanding the boundary of mc stories!! I enjoyed seeing an AI is taking over human freedom so naturally. It's on par with writing quality of some sci-fi masterpieces with great mc twist ;) Thanks to VIC and VICKI!! I hope to see Cameron's interactions with his Reflex mentor in the future or an sequel, too.
Anonymous
3/6/20, 12:47 PM
10/10 yet again. Totally brilliant wordplay.