Recent Comments

Jerry
3/6/20, 1:24 AM
hey edlam here is jerry! Thank you for u new story!
Anonymous
3/6/20, 12:42 AM
Fourth day trying to read It's really well written and the idea is interesting, but they got stuck in the hypnosis for soooo long, I got bored. Maybe I just don't have the patience
Anonymous
3/5/20, 9:46 PM
i think the explanation is simpler than that : he never had anything to do with the project. He simply noticed that Ivan is willing to obey him. But i do agree with you that he'll exploit that knowledge.
Martin
3/5/20, 8:59 PM
I'm going to remove *all* comments about the age of the protagonist and the story being allegedly pedophilic. That also includes the replies and the ones defening the author and my decision. Anyone who want to continue the discussion can do that in the forum in [this thread](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/discussion-about-rules-and-especially-the-underage-topic/1215/23). In case you want to save some of your comments from this section, just copy them manually and put them into a posting into that thread. The comment section of this story will remain locked for a couple of hours before I delete the comments.
Martin
3/5/20, 8:57 PM
I'm going to remove *all* comments about the age of the protagonist and the story being allegedly pedophilic. That also includes the replies and the ones defening the author and my decision. Anyone who wants to continue the discussion can do that in the forum in [this thread](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/discussion-about-rules-and-especially-the-underage-topic/1215/23). In case you want to save some of your comments from this section, just copy them manually and put them into a posting into that thread. The comment section of this story will remain locked for a couple of hours before I delete the comments.
HomoKnight
3/5/20, 8:09 PM
This series of yours made me want to create an account on this site and I wanted to thank you, can't wait for the next entry!
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
3/5/20, 3:57 PM
will we see a sequel?
3/5/20, 3:06 PM
Thanks, transformationheaven! Again, I find the reaction to date a bit absurd. The age of the character is mentioned once in parenthesis. If you like, I can change it to 18. It doesn't fundamentally change anything, but makes it a bit less realistic, since he's supposed to join the football team after completing his transformation.
transformheaven
3/5/20, 12:11 PM
Well your first story isn't short of comments, that's for sure :P I liked the story and OMG your instagram is sexy. Excited to see the next of your work!
Anonymous
3/5/20, 8:56 AM
So anyone else curious about Marcus? At first I thought the (australian?) waxer was in on the whole subjugation, and I don't think that him saying 'slave' and playing it off as 'love' were a slip of Ivans mind. Especially given that Hector didn't even suspect Marcus, I assume that they aren't directly in league. So now for my crack theory: I think Marcus was perhaps another scientist that used to work with Hector, and escaped the execution. He probably recognized the signs in Ivan and decided he too would prosper off the hypnotized stud.