Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/4/20, 7:32 PM
This is such a hot story! I wish we could see the cops turned into obedient slaves too
Mar 2, 2020
3/4/20, 7:26 PM
Great new story!
Anonymous
3/4/20, 3:35 PM
The "changed" point of view is amazing. It shows how his memory changes, from college student to male prostitute. Clever and hot!!!!
Anonymous
3/4/20, 3:33 PM
Great story!!!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
3/4/20, 2:36 PM
Looking forward to seeing where it goes!!
3/4/20, 8:59 AM
This series is great! I love the build up and the development!
3/4/20, 2:03 AM
SilentNobody, you are too clever for your own good. ;) You are right, he couldn't strap himself in because the main terminal is too far away, (plus honestly, Ivan wouldn't know what to do, and it may be a wee bit dangerous to have a slave know how to run the mind control machine) Hector has been making some mistakes, perhaps too many... and the cops may have set some problem in motion. Nothing slips past you, does it? Thanks a bunch, my friend, I hope I can continue to satisfy. :)
Anonymous
3/4/20, 1:45 AM
Had a really weird dream... my school had a Reflex Classroom in the meeting room next to the Football Coach's room :P Amazing storytelling!! Everything looks very interesting from character developments, product developments to story development!!
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3/4/20, 1:41 AM
Hot story! Maybe in the future Thomas can give Daniel more prompts so that his personality and desires more closely match the image that Thomas has crafted for him...
3/4/20, 1:41 AM
My, this reward system is showing it's cracks. I'm surprised Hector didn't send Ivan straight back into the Overmind as soon as he got home. Surely leaving him to think overnight is only going to make the situation worse and he'll be back to square one in the morning. I would've thought Ivan could have been instructed to strap himself into the Overmind every night while Hector was away, but I guess the controls were too far away and needed a second person to operate. Rookie mistake, Hector forgot to connect obedience with pleasure in Ivan's head. I still hope that Ivan becomes everything that Hector wants in a slave, but I'm all for making him work for it. I also get the feeling we're not done with police just yet. Great work as always.