Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/1/20, 5:06 PM
I return several times to this story. You leave us with many unexplained details. The gym muscle guy is a bit fake with his repetituous workouts. He even admits his vain glory in large biceps to display his every whim of tattoos. He is manipulated in a mobile park home. He just didn't expect this ... with his "graduate student" fetish. My word ... all the right words. He's rather unconsciously seeking out witty nerds yet when lavished with a punishing spell... he can't accept as his destiny. Twisted all round you writing evil fein. Shit, thanks.
Anonymous
3/1/20, 4:45 PM
So glad you are back! The MCBrains story is one I really like as well and so it was great reading this story. You are such a great writer that it's always worth the wait.
Anonymous
3/1/20, 4:42 PM
Really good chapter. love where this is going with Butch. keep it up!
Anonymous
3/1/20, 4:06 PM
I've been bored, lately, with the permutations of same old stories but this was good!! Really really good! Love the potential and set up for the next story and the many after!
3/1/20, 3:31 PM
Its been a while since I read such a classic hypnosis story with a gradual induction! Enjoyed it immensely, takes me back when i first read erotic hypnosis stories. Thank you so much! keep it up!
Geoff M
3/1/20, 3:00 PM
love it!
SirD
3/1/20, 2:32 PM
enjoyed the first chapter and hope there are more to come.
Anonymous
3/1/20, 2:16 PM
While I do love this story and think it is hot, I feel like it has transitioned away from MC/personality change with the titular chip to more of just an incest romance story.
Anonymous
3/1/20, 12:35 PM
Enjoy the method used in detailing the depths of powers. The painted rings are noted but not necessarily extrapolated into exact powers. This makes the whole process more mysterious. We are left not knowing the full powers while also showing a lack of all-encompassing power. Perhaps note to his new entranced bartenders that they will go the gym more, and elope with the skinniest nerd possible on the side. HA. Good stuff.
jackcspall@gmail.com
3/1/20, 10:55 AM
i literally cant wait for another installment of this series! Any idea when you might add another chapter?