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Anonymous
2/26/20, 10:33 AM
pretty great. needs a beta for small english errors.
Anonymous
2/26/20, 9:43 AM
spectacular thank
senpai
2/26/20, 9:40 AM
Yay! My boy Hawkeye is next! Also knew he is gonna be a man slut. Can't wait to see his conversion to be their personal toy.
2/26/20, 6:22 AM
Thanks everyone! I always appreciate what you guys have to say. SilentNobody, you have been so kind as to leave something on each chapter; always nice to see you. I must also say that you have made an astute observation. I won't reveal anything specific, but there are some significant dangers that our protagonist may have overlooked. I will also address you, nycboot, in this comment. I found it amusing that the last part/series in general reminded you of a 1954 B-Movie, as this was somewhat intentional and somewhat just my manner of writing. I've had a few good laughs writing the story and reading the (admittedly sometimes corny) language used! I hope it has had a relative comedic effect, and has not sounded **too** stupid or been too off-putting. :) Thanks again!
Anonymous
2/26/20, 4:37 AM
Slow build up always does it for me. Can't wait for the next installment.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
2/26/20, 4:17 AM
Great story! sorry for belated comment. I'm way behind on my reading :-D
Anonymous
2/26/20, 3:46 AM
Beautifully written! Awesome job, a joy to read. Love the struggle. Can't wait to read more :)
2/26/20, 2:13 AM
Dude... that was fuckin' hot.
nycboot
2/26/20, 1:39 AM
The Overmind can do many things, but it can't make the slave love Master. It will be interesting to see if Ivan can reach that level.
2/26/20, 1:37 AM
This was very hot. Nice setup. Lots of potential.