Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/26/20, 4:04 PM
This is amazing. A fun idea that delivers some really well written, steamy scenes. i would definitely like to learn more about what happens with these guys as well as other places where the reality enhancers get installed. I cant help but wonder what might happen at a men's day spa where the guests (and also the staff) are encouraged to relax, enjoy themselves, and relieve stress.
Anonymous
2/26/20, 4:02 PM
terrific
nycboot
2/26/20, 3:28 PM
Beautifully romantic! Your language in this story is so sensual, and it has a hypnotic effect - it's as if we're journeying with the protagonist. Wonderful!!
Anonymous
2/26/20, 2:54 PM
This is a really good start can't wait for more
Anonymous
2/26/20, 1:22 PM
Well this was a fantastic first story! Would love to see where it goes. How much of an obedient partner he is to Asterion now that he's been marked with his seed.
Anonymous
2/26/20, 10:33 AM
pretty great. needs a beta for small english errors.
Anonymous
2/26/20, 9:43 AM
spectacular thank
senpai
2/26/20, 9:40 AM
Yay! My boy Hawkeye is next! Also knew he is gonna be a man slut. Can't wait to see his conversion to be their personal toy.
2/26/20, 6:22 AM
Thanks everyone! I always appreciate what you guys have to say. SilentNobody, you have been so kind as to leave something on each chapter; always nice to see you. I must also say that you have made an astute observation. I won't reveal anything specific, but there are some significant dangers that our protagonist may have overlooked. I will also address you, nycboot, in this comment. I found it amusing that the last part/series in general reminded you of a 1954 B-Movie, as this was somewhat intentional and somewhat just my manner of writing. I've had a few good laughs writing the story and reading the (admittedly sometimes corny) language used! I hope it has had a relative comedic effect, and has not sounded **too** stupid or been too off-putting. :) Thanks again!
Anonymous
2/26/20, 4:37 AM
Slow build up always does it for me. Can't wait for the next installment.