Recent Comments

2/26/20, 6:22 AM
Thanks everyone! I always appreciate what you guys have to say. SilentNobody, you have been so kind as to leave something on each chapter; always nice to see you. I must also say that you have made an astute observation. I won't reveal anything specific, but there are some significant dangers that our protagonist may have overlooked. I will also address you, nycboot, in this comment. I found it amusing that the last part/series in general reminded you of a 1954 B-Movie, as this was somewhat intentional and somewhat just my manner of writing. I've had a few good laughs writing the story and reading the (admittedly sometimes corny) language used! I hope it has had a relative comedic effect, and has not sounded **too** stupid or been too off-putting. :) Thanks again!
Anonymous
2/26/20, 4:37 AM
Slow build up always does it for me. Can't wait for the next installment.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
2/26/20, 4:17 AM
Great story! sorry for belated comment. I'm way behind on my reading :-D
Anonymous
2/26/20, 3:46 AM
Beautifully written! Awesome job, a joy to read. Love the struggle. Can't wait to read more :)
2/26/20, 2:13 AM
Dude... that was fuckin' hot.
nycboot
2/26/20, 1:39 AM
The Overmind can do many things, but it can't make the slave love Master. It will be interesting to see if Ivan can reach that level.
2/26/20, 1:37 AM
This was very hot. Nice setup. Lots of potential.
2/26/20, 12:41 AM
Mike coming onto to Pine without any mind control was a welcome break from the mind control. You developed a genuine friendship with a sexual encounter, both hot and tender.
sqneemie@gmail.com
2/26/20, 12:30 AM
Thanks, guys--it means a lot that you take the time to comment. Seriously, I wouldn't do this if I didn't hear from you. I'm realizing I need a name for this company if I want to reference them later in the Neemieverse. Any ideas?
Anonymous
2/25/20, 11:54 PM
Side note about MA, the age of consent is actually 16 y/o. So if there was a complaint about this story, it's technically still legal in IRL (didn't see original complaint) minus the sharing of photos of himself that isn't legal while under 18, but yeah it's fiction and clearly stated.