Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/26/20, 4:37 AM
Slow build up always does it for me. Can't wait for the next installment.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
2/26/20, 4:17 AM
Great story! sorry for belated comment. I'm way behind on my reading :-D
Anonymous
2/26/20, 3:46 AM
Beautifully written! Awesome job, a joy to read. Love the struggle. Can't wait to read more :)
2/26/20, 2:13 AM
Dude... that was fuckin' hot.
nycboot
2/26/20, 1:39 AM
The Overmind can do many things, but it can't make the slave love Master. It will be interesting to see if Ivan can reach that level.
2/26/20, 1:37 AM
This was very hot. Nice setup. Lots of potential.
2/26/20, 12:41 AM
Mike coming onto to Pine without any mind control was a welcome break from the mind control. You developed a genuine friendship with a sexual encounter, both hot and tender.
sqneemie@gmail.com
2/26/20, 12:30 AM
Thanks, guys--it means a lot that you take the time to comment. Seriously, I wouldn't do this if I didn't hear from you. I'm realizing I need a name for this company if I want to reference them later in the Neemieverse. Any ideas?
Anonymous
2/25/20, 11:54 PM
Side note about MA, the age of consent is actually 16 y/o. So if there was a complaint about this story, it's technically still legal in IRL (didn't see original complaint) minus the sharing of photos of himself that isn't legal while under 18, but yeah it's fiction and clearly stated.
2/25/20, 11:36 PM
See there's still work to be done. Hopefully Ivan can become a full fledged slave with all the sexual interest that entails. A lot is being left to chance. They live so close to his father, it would be so easy for him to see Ivan. I'm really impressed with how diligent you are, getting two chapters done every week. Hope you keep up the good work.