Recent Comments

2/26/20, 1:37 AM
This was very hot. Nice setup. Lots of potential.
2/26/20, 12:41 AM
Mike coming onto to Pine without any mind control was a welcome break from the mind control. You developed a genuine friendship with a sexual encounter, both hot and tender.
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2/26/20, 12:30 AM
Thanks, guys--it means a lot that you take the time to comment. Seriously, I wouldn't do this if I didn't hear from you. I'm realizing I need a name for this company if I want to reference them later in the Neemieverse. Any ideas?
Anonymous
2/25/20, 11:54 PM
Side note about MA, the age of consent is actually 16 y/o. So if there was a complaint about this story, it's technically still legal in IRL (didn't see original complaint) minus the sharing of photos of himself that isn't legal while under 18, but yeah it's fiction and clearly stated.
2/25/20, 11:36 PM
See there's still work to be done. Hopefully Ivan can become a full fledged slave with all the sexual interest that entails. A lot is being left to chance. They live so close to his father, it would be so easy for him to see Ivan. I'm really impressed with how diligent you are, getting two chapters done every week. Hope you keep up the good work.
2/25/20, 11:32 PM
He's a good slave. Hope the control doesn't shift.
nycboot
2/25/20, 10:58 PM
I have to admit the scenario and the language sounds like a 1954 B-movie. But the action and content are wonderful. I think I'm one of the few people (who posts, at least) that absolutely **loves** the struggle that a subject goes through as his mind is being taken over or controlled. There are not that many stories that engage on that level for more than a paragraph or two. So you can imagine that for me this story is absolutely excellent. I love going with the slow change in Ivan. He's not supposed to be all that bright but it would be great if he kept on questioning "why" even as he submits so that he becomes totally convinced of his new life with the same amount of strength he used to chop wood in the backyard. Great work, and keep it going!!
Anonymous
2/25/20, 10:00 PM
Excellent story once again, your work is some of the best and sexiest stuff on here! Hope to see a continuation of this :)
Anonymous
2/25/20, 9:56 PM
phenomenal
Anonymous
2/25/20, 9:56 PM
excellent