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nycboot
2/25/20, 10:58 PM
I have to admit the scenario and the language sounds like a 1954 B-movie. But the action and content are wonderful. I think I'm one of the few people (who posts, at least) that absolutely **loves** the struggle that a subject goes through as his mind is being taken over or controlled. There are not that many stories that engage on that level for more than a paragraph or two. So you can imagine that for me this story is absolutely excellent. I love going with the slow change in Ivan. He's not supposed to be all that bright but it would be great if he kept on questioning "why" even as he submits so that he becomes totally convinced of his new life with the same amount of strength he used to chop wood in the backyard. Great work, and keep it going!!
Anonymous
2/25/20, 10:00 PM
Excellent story once again, your work is some of the best and sexiest stuff on here! Hope to see a continuation of this :)
Anonymous
2/25/20, 9:56 PM
phenomenal
Anonymous
2/25/20, 9:56 PM
excellent
Anonymous
2/25/20, 9:06 PM
Ah. Lee-am. Liam. Brothers-*in-arms*. I kept googling who Lee-am is. It took me part 2 to get it.
Anonymous
2/25/20, 8:56 PM
This is fantastic. Please continue!
Anonymous
2/25/20, 8:45 PM
Good story- I hope Jim gets as nice and hairy as his targets over time. More please!
Wonder Bread
2/25/20, 7:44 PM
oooooo love the mental change
Anonymous
2/25/20, 7:28 PM
you are absolutely my favorite writer on this site rn. the way you build the tension of het men realizing they wanna fuck other men is so fucking hot
Anonymous
2/25/20, 6:38 PM
god thats hot! we need more muscle marys!