Recent Comments

2/24/20, 11:19 PM
Short and a bit confusing, needs more detail and descriptions. Not a bad idea though, would like to hear more.
Anonymous
2/24/20, 10:47 PM
Really glad to see you're back at work on this one! I was just thinking about this the other day. As someone who loves Steve I do hope he somehow finds a way to assert some of his dominance in his true self.
Lusty Stallion
2/24/20, 10:35 PM
Thanks man. trouble is it takes a few hours for each transformation. i might get round it at a later date but figured i should get the stories out first. glad you liked the previous photos. im back st work after my vacation where i had no internet so no google for photos. just snatched time to write.
Anonymous
2/24/20, 10:15 PM
Amazing second chapter! Like you, I don't typically want romance in these kind of stories (romance is great, just not what I look for in slut transformation smut) but I think it works ok here bc it helps make Ben a bit more likable. I'd have been ok with Ben just fucking with Darren's cognitions and using him as a human fleshlight too, but this is good. I'd like to see them both keep changing each other, and on the one hand it would be sweet if they end up together. On the other hand I think it'd be hotter to see Darren's sense of self change from “Darren. Self. Body. Healthy. Straight. Cognitive Neuroscientist. Academic. Researcher. Career-oriented. Son. Man. Friend.” to “Darren. Self. Body. Healthy. Gay. Loves Men. Cockwhore. Dumb slut. Fuckhole. Cock-oriented. Son. Man. Friend.”
Anonymous
2/24/20, 7:14 PM
I loved this! Please make more
Freaky bitch
2/24/20, 7:04 PM
i think this is amazing. i do not have a problem with any of this, i will say that i hope they somehow end up together as a freaky relationship. love your work
Andreas L
2/24/20, 6:57 PM
^ totally disagree, I'm looking forward to Darren finding out, but I don't want him to change himself back. His changes are so damn hot!! I think he should change Ben some more :-)
Anonymous
2/24/20, 6:45 PM
awesome awesome awesome. I love the fact that you're writing 2 perspectives! I love every detail you've placed on this. very nice that you kept the slave manly! I hope you add more muscular slaves and further continue mind fucking the slave! keep it up!
2/24/20, 6:14 PM
Feels like it's a bit rushed, skimping on detail and character some. You might want to try slowing the pace down to focus on the transformations and the reactions. A compelling start, though, keep going!
Anonymous
2/24/20, 4:36 PM
I think Darren should realize it all and revert some changes back (throatpussy and all got a too much for me) I also think he shouldnt be dumbed down or focusing on cock a lot,I kinda wish he would enjoy both.