Recent Comments

Lusty Stallion
2/23/20, 10:47 PM
hi guys I'm not finding time for the photos and doing more with description. hope you like the new ones
Willie Cici
2/23/20, 9:09 PM
Yes. The tone of the Welsh inspired that part of the story.
Stinkykev
2/23/20, 7:26 PM
Marcus now has the perfect life as Stinky the Punk - a great ending to this thread - though i hope he retains some memory of Marcus at it makes his new life even hotter
Anonymous
2/23/20, 5:59 PM
Have read before. Enjoyed it just as much this time. Well written. Caught my attention from the first.
2/23/20, 5:59 PM
Really a hot story, I hope you write more soon.
TheAuthor
2/23/20, 5:21 PM
Thanks. I'm still just a noob in writing in general so I'm just slowly progressing as a, *well hopefully*, a writer.
Anonymous
2/23/20, 4:46 PM
There arent many original premises, really, just original takes on themes. This is an enjoyable one. A few grammatic errors but really a lot of fun and so full of potential! And if your intent is to set up future chapters, this is a good prologue.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/23/20, 4:41 PM
I would volunteer to have anybody zap me with that pen/laser doodad.
Anonymous
2/23/20, 4:09 PM
this is like seriously hot. need more
Anonymous
2/23/20, 2:46 PM
Underrated af