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Anonymous
2/23/20, 2:46 PM
Underrated af
TheAuthor
2/23/20, 2:25 PM
Yeah, I had very specific ideas for it but I don't have experience on writing humiliation/punishment stuff so I just made it *really* vague. So that way, other writers can freely add chapters about it if they choose to do so.
sergio10andrade@gmail.com
2/23/20, 1:39 PM
I can understand not wanting "to get in the rabbit hole of dark stories" I am often turned off by some of the graphic nature of humiliation in the stories on this site but I think your story would have better if descibe some of the details of your subjects's punishment,
sergio10andrade@gmail.com
2/23/20, 1:30 PM
Enjoying your series, out of curiosity your spells is the language based on Welsh?
Anonymous
2/23/20, 9:27 AM
this need a second chapter
ejg
2/23/20, 8:50 AM
Alas,u never did progress with this.Shame, i liked Alex and His dominance
Martin
2/23/20, 7:55 AM
Thanks anon. I'll let this stay, as it's simply straight to the point. The original complaints have been deleted though.
Anonymous
2/23/20, 7:02 AM
No, he shouldn't be ashamed. It's you who needs to get a grip. He's not merely 'complaining.' How many times does it need to be bashed over people's heads before they understand? Not every country is the U.S. The character is not underage to every reader. And come on, please be respectful. Martin asked for this to be discussed elsewhere. This poor author's story is turning into a battleground. I know this will be deleted soon but I had to say it. You have some inner strength to deal with this B.S all the time, Martin. BTW I'm aware the character says he's from Boston bla bla. BUT, this story is still fiction, and doesn't truly represent America, or maybe it does, as I'm sure some younger people do get into sticky situations in that country, at that age *shrugs*
Dec 4, 2019
Anonymous
2/23/20, 5:06 AM
i loved the story but i was a theatre major and laughed when I saw Cats. The story was hot though.
2/23/20, 1:47 AM
I had a feeling that Mikey would drink the formula as well, but that's the bond he has with Pine. So where do we go from here with Pine, Mikey, Gary and the football team?