Recent Comments

sergio10andrade@gmail.com
2/23/20, 1:30 PM
Enjoying your series, out of curiosity your spells is the language based on Welsh?
Anonymous
2/23/20, 9:27 AM
this need a second chapter
ejg
2/23/20, 8:50 AM
Alas,u never did progress with this.Shame, i liked Alex and His dominance
Martin
2/23/20, 7:55 AM
Thanks anon. I'll let this stay, as it's simply straight to the point. The original complaints have been deleted though.
Anonymous
2/23/20, 7:02 AM
No, he shouldn't be ashamed. It's you who needs to get a grip. He's not merely 'complaining.' How many times does it need to be bashed over people's heads before they understand? Not every country is the U.S. The character is not underage to every reader. And come on, please be respectful. Martin asked for this to be discussed elsewhere. This poor author's story is turning into a battleground. I know this will be deleted soon but I had to say it. You have some inner strength to deal with this B.S all the time, Martin. BTW I'm aware the character says he's from Boston bla bla. BUT, this story is still fiction, and doesn't truly represent America, or maybe it does, as I'm sure some younger people do get into sticky situations in that country, at that age *shrugs*
Dec 4, 2019
Anonymous
2/23/20, 5:06 AM
i loved the story but i was a theatre major and laughed when I saw Cats. The story was hot though.
2/23/20, 1:47 AM
I had a feeling that Mikey would drink the formula as well, but that's the bond he has with Pine. So where do we go from here with Pine, Mikey, Gary and the football team?
Feb 22, 2020
2/23/20, 1:35 AM
Stormbound, the curse ended when he became gay and said Yeah Homo or that how I intended it. Sorry if that does not comes off clear.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/22/20, 8:08 PM
I hope you keep going after this series
Feb 22, 2020
2/22/20, 6:40 PM
Nice story! Only thing I wish was that the curse copied attributes he noticed, so seeing the smooth well endowed swimmer would've caused him to become smooth/hairless and well endowed too. Still enjoyed it as written though. Keep it up!