Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/24/20, 6:45 PM
awesome awesome awesome. I love the fact that you're writing 2 perspectives! I love every detail you've placed on this. very nice that you kept the slave manly! I hope you add more muscular slaves and further continue mind fucking the slave! keep it up!
2/24/20, 6:14 PM
Feels like it's a bit rushed, skimping on detail and character some. You might want to try slowing the pace down to focus on the transformations and the reactions. A compelling start, though, keep going!
Anonymous
2/24/20, 4:36 PM
I think Darren should realize it all and revert some changes back (throatpussy and all got a too much for me) I also think he shouldnt be dumbed down or focusing on cock a lot,I kinda wish he would enjoy both.
Anonymous
2/24/20, 2:23 PM
You are THE BEST!
Feb 22, 2020
Anonymous
2/24/20, 11:14 AM
very hot! would love to hear some more curses
Anonymous
2/24/20, 8:34 AM
Can we have photos of what they look like after the transformation like last time
gaudi400@gmail.com
2/24/20, 7:39 AM
Awesome story, and more update please
Anonymous
2/24/20, 4:24 AM
ignore that last guy! I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please make more.
2/24/20, 4:11 AM
A self proclaimed smart guy, couldn't put two and two together that it isn't normal to have a throat pussy.
firesix
2/24/20, 4:05 AM
Logging onto the site and finding a sequel already uploaded... literally like Christmas morning. And this lived up to my all my hopes. You're a fantastic writer with a real skill for making even the quieter parts of the story insanely hot. As far as the "love" aspect goes - I'm not usually huge on it either. I prefer my stories hard and quick, without mushy stuff in between. But I think in this story, you did it pretty well. That aspect didn't distract from the hot parts of the story, and was interesting in a way. So while it's not generally my thing, I want to commend you on how well you did it.