Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/21/20, 10:19 PM
I've actually had situation's happen like this... it's super hot. But then you get scared... well at least I did... I was doing it because I was lonely. I'm just glad I can supplement those desires with this.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/21/20, 8:28 PM
I dream of chats like that, bummer they aren't real, at least for me.
Anonymous
2/21/20, 7:53 PM
Still came back to check for update. :3
Anonymous
2/21/20, 7:36 PM
I wake up every morning and I know I'm the Queen of England. My bedroom certainly doesn't look like it belongs in Buckingham Palace, but I KNOW I'm the Queen of England...it must be the hair.
firesix
2/21/20, 7:35 PM
RIDICULOUSLY hot. Just insane. Easily the best story I've read here in at least several months. I'm hoping you continue!
Anonymous
2/21/20, 6:42 PM
I thought this story was creative and witty. The story is not written as a day-to-day diary. There are going to be jumps in time. I'm not sure what the commenter above was talking about, but I didn't see it. It was classic WillieC!
Anonymous
2/21/20, 6:38 PM
Story is great. Well-written; well conceived. As for future story line, Darren has to figure out that Ben is fucking with the computer and do something to 'alter Ben's cognition'. That would be hot!!!
ForgottenCradle
2/21/20, 3:37 PM
okay,either someone's got similar powers to Pine or he absently drank some of his own load and is affected now... in any case,a really good chapter again. love the mind control but also the character development. looking forward to other teams that are coming
Oct 5, 2019
Anonymous
2/21/20, 3:04 PM
Amazing, you should definitely make a sequel/a similar story.
Martin
2/21/20, 1:43 PM
Would you like to put some of the artwork into your story? You can add it directly into your text. Let me know if you need help doing that! Thank you a lot for this story. It's unbelievably hot!