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ForgottenCradle
2/21/20, 3:37 PM
okay,either someone's got similar powers to Pine or he absently drank some of his own load and is affected now... in any case,a really good chapter again. love the mind control but also the character development. looking forward to other teams that are coming
Oct 5, 2019
Anonymous
2/21/20, 3:04 PM
Amazing, you should definitely make a sequel/a similar story.
Martin
2/21/20, 1:43 PM
Would you like to put some of the artwork into your story? You can add it directly into your text. Let me know if you need help doing that! Thank you a lot for this story. It's unbelievably hot!
Anonymous
2/21/20, 9:37 AM
make him a slave please
Anonymous
2/21/20, 8:16 AM
This was fantastic! Manly dad.
2/21/20, 6:14 AM
For your second story you did much better. In fact this second one is by far out surpassed the first story. Really good work here.
Anonymous
2/21/20, 5:14 AM
It's a great idea, and it could be a great story. But this didn't read as well as your other works. It felt really clunky and had a lot of instant changes that weren't developed.
Anonymous
2/21/20, 5:01 AM
I'm seconding Bibimbap, turning someone into a slut is hot, turning an arrogant straight brat into a slut would be even hotter
Anonymous
2/21/20, 4:35 AM
Super super impressive. Especially for your first story. Cant wait for more.
I Dream of Unfinished Houses
2/21/20, 2:14 AM
That was amazing man!!! Keep it up. I hope we get to see more of Tim's friends!