Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/21/20, 6:42 PM
I thought this story was creative and witty. The story is not written as a day-to-day diary. There are going to be jumps in time. I'm not sure what the commenter above was talking about, but I didn't see it. It was classic WillieC!
Anonymous
2/21/20, 6:38 PM
Story is great. Well-written; well conceived. As for future story line, Darren has to figure out that Ben is fucking with the computer and do something to 'alter Ben's cognition'. That would be hot!!!
ForgottenCradle
2/21/20, 3:37 PM
okay,either someone's got similar powers to Pine or he absently drank some of his own load and is affected now... in any case,a really good chapter again. love the mind control but also the character development. looking forward to other teams that are coming
Oct 5, 2019
Anonymous
2/21/20, 3:04 PM
Amazing, you should definitely make a sequel/a similar story.
Martin
2/21/20, 1:43 PM
Would you like to put some of the artwork into your story? You can add it directly into your text. Let me know if you need help doing that! Thank you a lot for this story. It's unbelievably hot!
Anonymous
2/21/20, 9:37 AM
make him a slave please
Anonymous
2/21/20, 8:16 AM
This was fantastic! Manly dad.
2/21/20, 6:14 AM
For your second story you did much better. In fact this second one is by far out surpassed the first story. Really good work here.
Anonymous
2/21/20, 5:14 AM
It's a great idea, and it could be a great story. But this didn't read as well as your other works. It felt really clunky and had a lot of instant changes that weren't developed.
Anonymous
2/21/20, 5:01 AM
I'm seconding Bibimbap, turning someone into a slut is hot, turning an arrogant straight brat into a slut would be even hotter