Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/19/20, 6:51 AM
This was hot, but should be re-written to make the conclusion mostly from Paul's point of view because at this point in the story Tommy is too stupid to make a good narrator.
2/19/20, 6:40 AM
Just discovered this story and I absolutely loved it. Great premise and story can't wait to read the next chapters.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 6:11 AM
Oh how I wish this story would return.. :(
Martin
2/19/20, 5:49 AM
Ok, I've fixed the series for you (make sure to use the same series name for all stories). But you still used two different author names. You can fix that yourself by editing the story with the wrong author name.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 4:29 AM
Above comment -- good idea for continuing story line.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 3:10 AM
The third part of that series is close to your story, an uncle gets mind fucked and turned into a obedient muscle cop to his nephew. I was never able to find more work by that author, but hope it gives you some inspiration.
2/19/20, 1:49 AM
For planning only on the first chapter , but coming up with this to carry the story onward, you certainly did inspire. Absolutely great.
2/19/20, 1:35 AM
Thank you so much!
Wow
2/19/20, 12:21 AM
These are the best stories I've ever read. So hot!
Anonymous
2/19/20, 12:20 AM
I hope Oyama turns into a total muscle sissy.