Recent Comments

Hypelios
2/19/20, 4:45 PM
Damn that was hot.. got my *ick hard. lol good story.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 3:13 PM
I really *really* don't like an evil protagonist but your writing is so damn good. *Sigh* I have no idea if I like this series or not. Well, I guess we won't see a happy ending for the original character Jake :(
Anonymous
2/19/20, 3:05 PM
definitely a hot story! I need to write one now.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 1:24 PM
Hope this turns into a series. Really enjoyed this.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 1:06 PM
will we see next part soon?
BankStreet
2/19/20, 11:42 AM
Great story. I loved the pace, Jeremy's slow descent -- his initial resistance, then his inevitable slide into the comforts of seduction and transformation from uptight aspiring professional to drooling stoner handyman. Love it!
Anonymous
2/19/20, 11:00 AM
Nobody here would name their kid Jaromir, so I think the most fitting would be Jarek. Fun story either way. Hit pretty close to my assimilation fantasies
Anonymous
2/19/20, 9:48 AM
I wish they'd end up as a couple
2/19/20, 6:58 AM
It was getting really good. Could use some more paragraphs to space things out. Seems a bit rushed but would have loved to see this change happen a bit more slowly.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 6:51 AM
This was hot, but should be re-written to make the conclusion mostly from Paul's point of view because at this point in the story Tommy is too stupid to make a good narrator.