Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/19/20, 3:05 PM
definitely a hot story! I need to write one now.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 1:24 PM
Hope this turns into a series. Really enjoyed this.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 1:06 PM
will we see next part soon?
BankStreet
2/19/20, 11:42 AM
Great story. I loved the pace, Jeremy's slow descent -- his initial resistance, then his inevitable slide into the comforts of seduction and transformation from uptight aspiring professional to drooling stoner handyman. Love it!
Anonymous
2/19/20, 11:00 AM
Nobody here would name their kid Jaromir, so I think the most fitting would be Jarek. Fun story either way. Hit pretty close to my assimilation fantasies
Anonymous
2/19/20, 9:48 AM
I wish they'd end up as a couple
2/19/20, 6:58 AM
It was getting really good. Could use some more paragraphs to space things out. Seems a bit rushed but would have loved to see this change happen a bit more slowly.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 6:51 AM
This was hot, but should be re-written to make the conclusion mostly from Paul's point of view because at this point in the story Tommy is too stupid to make a good narrator.
2/19/20, 6:40 AM
Just discovered this story and I absolutely loved it. Great premise and story can't wait to read the next chapters.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 6:11 AM
Oh how I wish this story would return.. :(