Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/19/20, 1:06 PM
will we see next part soon?
BankStreet
2/19/20, 11:42 AM
Great story. I loved the pace, Jeremy's slow descent -- his initial resistance, then his inevitable slide into the comforts of seduction and transformation from uptight aspiring professional to drooling stoner handyman. Love it!
Anonymous
2/19/20, 11:00 AM
Nobody here would name their kid Jaromir, so I think the most fitting would be Jarek. Fun story either way. Hit pretty close to my assimilation fantasies
Anonymous
2/19/20, 9:48 AM
I wish they'd end up as a couple
2/19/20, 6:58 AM
It was getting really good. Could use some more paragraphs to space things out. Seems a bit rushed but would have loved to see this change happen a bit more slowly.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 6:51 AM
This was hot, but should be re-written to make the conclusion mostly from Paul's point of view because at this point in the story Tommy is too stupid to make a good narrator.
2/19/20, 6:40 AM
Just discovered this story and I absolutely loved it. Great premise and story can't wait to read the next chapters.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 6:11 AM
Oh how I wish this story would return.. :(
Martin
2/19/20, 5:49 AM
Ok, I've fixed the series for you (make sure to use the same series name for all stories). But you still used two different author names. You can fix that yourself by editing the story with the wrong author name.
Anonymous
2/19/20, 4:29 AM
Above comment -- good idea for continuing story line.