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Gino
2/17/20, 11:07 PM
Next Chapter? Hot story! thank you
Anonymous
2/17/20, 8:14 PM
are you posting more of this on your FA?
Proofreading help?
2/17/20, 7:40 PM
Hello! I am the creator of Ryleigh. I'm sorry to contact you here, but I didn't know how to reach out to you! I am a native English speaker, so if you would like help proofreading the story, please contact me! I would like to help you with this project in any way that I can, I feel very strongly about it! You can DM me on twitter at @ningyotoko. If I can contact you through some other means, please let me know via our mutual artist friend. You know who!
jemsea13@yahoo.com
2/17/20, 6:45 PM
Very good for a first story posting. You should make it a series of guys running into this mysterious bar tender with vials of potions!
Anonymous
2/17/20, 2:38 PM
Reminds me of my all time favorite series by Mindbender: http://www.pridesites.com/omelissokomos/mindbender/leathernecks-01.html
Anonymous
2/17/20, 1:37 PM
Really excited to hear more about Matthew! thanks for sharing such a great story. Cheers!
malskin
2/17/20, 1:33 PM
i agree another great chapter - i am wondering with Aaron's parents going away there might be a tragic accident and as Butch is the only one left he has to stay with him for good
boi98229
2/17/20, 4:18 AM
Thanks so much! i practice hypnosis a lot as a subject, and found that i was beginning to trance and get hard as the professor talked Aiden into a deep trance. As a result for me, this story was very arousing, more so than other stories which i also find quite enthralling but not generally to the same extent. That said, i agree with Heru Kane that the professor's having been fired for almost the same thing previously made it seem very unlikely that he would jump into this so quickly and without more concern and forethought. Actually other than the fact of having had a previous hypnosis practice, I don't think the background story about the firing was helpful at all to the overall story. I certainly would have thought that in any case more conversation prior to trance, some sort of preliminary written agreement, and conducting the full erotic session at the professor's home would have made the story more realistic and longer - both good changes I think! Still a very good story, and one which represents the actual process of hypnosis (at least from my experience) much better than most other stories on this site. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Thanks again!! ;))
Anonymous
2/17/20, 3:38 AM
This is a great series. Thanks.
Willie Cici
2/17/20, 3:36 AM
This was great. I was working on a prison story, but I want to see where you go with your story. Well written and storyline engaging. Thanks.