Recent Comments

Feb 13, 2020
Anonymous
2/13/20, 8:52 PM
Good concept, but the conclusion feels like it happens way too quickly. You’ve got a nice, slow boil going on through the first part and then BLAM, he gets the leather and it’s over in seconds
Anonymous
2/13/20, 8:47 PM
Awesome! It will be cool to read how Matthew adjusts to this.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/13/20, 7:56 PM
I like Randy too
Anonymous
2/13/20, 7:23 PM
Yeah the plumber being oblivious and so suggestible is so hot. Especially having a wrench up his ass. Just commenting about it gets me so hard. Hopefully we get to see more ! Thanks for writing
Anonymous
2/13/20, 6:18 PM
I like Randdy, I hope he keeps his powers
Mdlftr
2/13/20, 5:49 PM
Terrific beginning! I like this introduction - "Nothing to see here, just come this way...down the garden path.....[foreboding music in the background]"
Anonymous
2/13/20, 2:23 PM
A great start!! Can't wait next!!
2/13/20, 1:23 PM
Loved it . Was fun and hope more chapters ruining happy lives
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
2/13/20, 12:16 PM
Hope we get to see Sid broken as well. Very nice!
Anonymous
2/13/20, 12:07 PM
intriguing start! Is this a follow-up on 'A game over coffee'?