Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/13/20, 4:46 AM
MathReez - keep writing, but revisions/editing is also part of writing. You have a good story here. Keep it going. Remember: coal, when polished, looks like a diamond.
2/13/20, 4:41 AM
Love this kind of story. Thanks!
2/13/20, 4:10 AM
Wow!!! What an emotional rollercoaster that led to Martin becoming Phil's slave!!! And to have Luke show up and have Martin pleasure him; really amazing stuff you've written. The first chapter was a light appetizer for this first part of the main course. Please keep it coming.
2/13/20, 4:03 AM
Love the whole Matt Bomer reference; any story that can work in the man who brought Neal Caffrey to life is off to a good start. What a setup; can't wait to see how James is transformed by the Reflex.
Anonymous
2/13/20, 1:14 AM
i can't believe it is still a set-up!! I appreciate the details and character development, too.
blankbot
2/13/20, 1:03 AM
Thanks for the story. You're an excellent writer.
2/13/20, 1:01 AM
Looking forward to this one. I also used to get off to Bowflex infomercials on in the middle of the night.
2/13/20, 12:17 AM
Wow!!! The whole team drank the punch??!! What an unexpected turn of events; really takes the story in a different (and funny) direction!!
Anonymous
2/12/20, 11:58 PM
Awesome
corinthian
2/12/20, 11:56 PM
That's a very entertaining and imaginative piece of writing - thank you! (very hot too!)