Recent Comments

3/24/20, 12:56 AM
I love soooo much this story, just as much as all of your stories, and I have to agree with most of the people here, I love their dynamics and the fact that they may become like a real couple, so that's sooo nice, still, the lack of mind control is something I bet you are aware of, so I rely we can get much of that later. TBH is so refreshing to read this kind of romantic yet very well-thought story, congratulations and I hooope we get an update soon! xoxo
3/24/20, 12:44 AM
Amazing ! Can't wait for next chapter
3/23/20, 11:09 PM
Thanks everyone! More to come!
Anonymous
3/23/20, 10:31 PM
my favorite and love a poetic atmosphere.
Anonymous
3/23/20, 8:08 PM
this was amazing, I loved Marco's muscle growth combined with his cock shrinking. awesome work!
Anonymous
3/23/20, 8:03 PM
great work !
3/23/20, 7:47 PM
Love your stories and your writing. Love the different aspects of your transformations. Love all types flattop military too, definitely mowhawk, redneck, punk, MPB bald with walrus mustache and age progression...so many choices. Great job!
3/23/20, 7:10 PM
Even though this is a re-write of the other story, it is still just as hot and the additional twists you've added are great! Please keep this going, I'd like to see the next stage of their transformation and if this gets spread out to the rest of the hockey team.
3/23/20, 6:35 PM
Always loved this one--you can write a fabulous twink tf when you decide to!
3/23/20, 6:33 PM
next time you make a story like this, what about when the stranger changes a place some police officers gets in the place and get accidentally get caught and their transformation is delayed, or even decides to actively goes to turn public services like the police station, the post office, the fire department and eventually the city hall and city council to turn the whole town into a gay utopia