Recent Comments

2/11/20, 8:14 PM
You rock, benevolent overlord. ;)
Martin
2/11/20, 8:05 PM
It's good enough for me :)
sqneemie@gmail.com
2/11/20, 6:42 PM
Are the name changes enough? Looking back over the rules this might not qualify...
Heather Wayne
2/11/20, 6:30 PM
Your use of the English language is great considering it is Not your primary language. Waiting on the next installment. Thanks
Anonymous
2/11/20, 6:27 PM
I think it'd be way better if Arnie got some revenge and turned the tables around Maybe even tagging in some of his friends
screamingmoist
2/11/20, 6:04 PM
thanks! glad you enjoyed it!
screamingmoist
2/11/20, 5:54 PM
just saw this comment - it's back up, along with part one.
2/11/20, 5:02 PM
These are excellent stories, love your ideas and writing style. Definitely one of my favorite contributors.
Apr 4, 2019
Anonymous
2/11/20, 2:14 PM
More feet please!
Anonymous
2/11/20, 1:56 PM
The concept of this story has so much potential. But ---- Community authors -- please write and edit your addition to this story so that it is readable. This was awful. Sentences that went nowhere, spelling, syntax. Awful. It got in the way of what is a clever story line. I would encourage the author to spend some time, edit the story using MSWord tools and repost. Please!