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2/11/20, 5:02 PM
These are excellent stories, love your ideas and writing style. Definitely one of my favorite contributors.
Apr 4, 2019
Anonymous
2/11/20, 2:14 PM
More feet please!
Anonymous
2/11/20, 1:56 PM
The concept of this story has so much potential. But ---- Community authors -- please write and edit your addition to this story so that it is readable. This was awful. Sentences that went nowhere, spelling, syntax. Awful. It got in the way of what is a clever story line. I would encourage the author to spend some time, edit the story using MSWord tools and repost. Please!
Anonymous
2/11/20, 11:08 AM
Love it hopefully Arnie's dad was affected by the ALTR button and shows up in the next episode!
Ion
2/11/20, 8:48 AM
this story is really catching my interest... I hope more is coming soon.
2/11/20, 8:48 AM
damn the teasing us real, love it. geez are you webcomic artist?
malskin
2/11/20, 7:20 AM
seems as if Arnie now has a special bond with his step Daddy something he did not have with his dad.....not sure but are the effects of the video game permanent?
Willie Cici
2/11/20, 5:11 AM
Didn't disappoint. Loved it!!
Willie Cici
2/11/20, 5:03 AM
I must be late to the party. I missed this one when it was first posted. This was great. I agree with H-Thrill. Storyline is solid, dialogue is good, sex is hot! All the bases covered.
2/11/20, 2:57 AM
Like others have said, the story felt a bit rushed. You could have expanded the moments when the knights disappear and the fear and searching that the remaining knights experience. But again another amazing piece from one of the foreign members of the site; it really is amazing to see and read all of your works.