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12/7/24, 6:39 PM
This is fast becoming a favorite. Hope part 3 comes quickly.
12/7/24, 6:36 PM
This looks good so far, Will Superman become a loyal and will slave to Lex, look forward to the next chapter
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12/7/24, 6:28 PM
So hot!!! Can’t wait to see the next chapter 😍
12/7/24, 10:33 AM
You weren't kidding when you said this was darker than your usual chapters. However, amazing writing as always! I liked the dialogues with and between the nanobots. It was unique, sometimes funny and it presented his corruption excellently. It's also interesting to see how the difference in the "prime" personality affects the way they designate their drones and their relationship with them. I'm going to guess that a part of the "final battle" would be between Alex's nanobots and Rob's viruses to see who can convert whom. Out of curiosity, do you have your chapters written in advance or do you go with it as it evolves?

12/7/24, 4:27 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Hey, thank you for the kind words and feedback. I usually have an ending in mind pretty early in the writing process, but not a chapter-by-chapter breakdown. Knowing the ending helps me with guiding the story and with foreshadowing, but I let each chapter evolve as I’m writing it and occasionally I find a different ending than I was expecting while writing (but only if the new ending “feels” more meaningful or natural than the original one I had in mind.) I’m actually a little stuck with this story right now. I know the ending I think I want, but getting from here to there doesn’t have a roadmap. I’m working on it :wink:
12/7/24, 4:01 PM
I sure do hope to read more of this sometime! 🍆

12/7/24, 4:02 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thanks for reading! The next part is half written but then we had the US election and I got real depressed. But I will finish this story.
12/7/24, 3:43 PM
This is the future they want to protect us from, but I'm so here for it.
12/6/24, 3:57 PM
That was actually quite fun and hot read! I think you could do this on your own w/o ai assistance. BTW, why don't you move over to BlueSky. I can't follow you on X, but I'd follow you on BSky anytime!

12/7/24, 3:42 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Agreed. We want to see your raw talent. And what's X? ;)