Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/10/20, 3:23 PM
It's interesting how the journeyman is still learning, and in his wanting to help, still screws up.
screamingmoist
2/10/20, 2:22 PM
Right? I would 100% be a repeat customer.
2/10/20, 10:28 AM
Thanks for the comments. Hehehe I think he'll be okay, SilentNobody... the only 'lasting effects' being the ones that bring him that much closer to his fate...
Anonymous
2/10/20, 10:06 AM
terrific
malskin
2/10/20, 9:59 AM
wow another great chapter, for me i am liking the fact that Noel is being attracted to the rubber clad drone, i hope that system thats that into account for his designation
transformheaven
2/10/20, 7:31 AM
I agree with slowing it down a little. As for your writing, most mistakes are in weird ways of using verbs, something the free version of Grammarly can help you with, so consider checking that out! :) Great idea and arousing story though ;)
Anonymous
2/10/20, 7:24 AM
Would love to see more
NZCUB
2/10/20, 5:43 AM
You have a amazing way of narrating & presenting stories, I have read and re read your stories many times and loved them all, please keep up the great work.
Anonymous
2/10/20, 5:39 AM
You going to continue writing more :)?
Anonymous
2/10/20, 5:15 AM
wow...i wonder what will happen once you bring out the pimp....that will be so hot!!!!!!