Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/10/20, 5:39 AM
You going to continue writing more :)?
Anonymous
2/10/20, 5:15 AM
wow...i wonder what will happen once you bring out the pimp....that will be so hot!!!!!!
2/10/20, 5:05 AM
Hope Ivan isn't brain damaged and there are no lasting effects.
Anonymous
2/10/20, 5:02 AM
The writing was too rushed and doesn't make sense. Go a little slower and think about what you're writing and how it sounds when you speak it out loud.
Anonymous
2/10/20, 4:08 AM
Well, first, let's start with the writing. It sucked. It was written and never edited. Second, the story -- holy shit! I think that's all I can handle.
Anonymous
2/10/20, 4:02 AM
Hot and funny, especially at the end!!!
Anonymous
2/10/20, 3:45 AM
strongly reminds me of an animated clip I've seen on a couple sites. may want to change a few things, for copyright safety
2/10/20, 1:55 AM
I get how it could have been it's own story. It's linked to the others because of the ring aspect. I do plan to write other stories that are not ring related.
Anonymous
2/9/20, 11:38 PM
This was amazing! can't wait to read more with the father
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2/9/20, 11:22 PM
I wouldn't mind that kind of attention at a jock shop.