Recent Comments

2/10/20, 1:55 AM
I get how it could have been it's own story. It's linked to the others because of the ring aspect. I do plan to write other stories that are not ring related.
Anonymous
2/9/20, 11:38 PM
This was amazing! can't wait to read more with the father
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/9/20, 11:22 PM
I wouldn't mind that kind of attention at a jock shop.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/9/20, 11:19 PM
will you finish this one?
Feb 3, 2020
2/9/20, 10:02 PM
Yes! Loved the foot hypnosis and the humor in this story. It's always hot whenever regular guys get put under, and I swear this sounds like me and my friends lmao. Great job, please keep writing! It's always great seeing more foot focused writing ;)
Martin
2/9/20, 9:43 PM
Oh fuck... What a hot story! EXACTLY my thing.... please don't let us wait for too long!
Feb 9, 2020
Thom
2/9/20, 9:16 PM
Wait why do you have my name, stranger
Zane
2/9/20, 8:30 PM
Don’t worry JoSmith take all the time you need, we will patiently wait for a new chapter. I’m excited to read more of “Stacy’s Dad“ and “Personal Toy” has always been a favorite of mine.
Feb 9, 2020
Anonymous
2/9/20, 5:14 PM
Thom, your other story: http://web.archive.org/web/20050212114226/http://www.maelstromx.com/trans/stories/story24.html http://web.archive.org/web/20050212114610/http://www.maelstromx.com/trans/stories/story25.html http://web.archive.org/web/20050212114610/http://www.maelstromx.com/trans/stories/story26.html
2/9/20, 5:14 PM
Fantastic premise--it just needs to go a little slower with the storytelling. Spend more time on the narrator's mental transformation; right now, he jumps too quickly from revulsion to acceptance.