Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/8/20, 5:41 AM
I loved this so much!!!! Please continue this! I need more
2/8/20, 5:15 AM
You're right Udems. The next chapter includes Hale messing around with the other 2 bands ;)
Anonymous
2/8/20, 3:48 AM
Enjoyed the humor a lot. Lots of stories can get me hard, but not many can make me laugh with a boner. Awesome job
Elmara
2/8/20, 2:27 AM
This is so incredibly hot dude, serioulsy. You are an incredible author. I really want to see more and to actually see Jeff getting into the frat and becoming a frat boy. I'd also love to read about his life at K.O.K. after he enters so hopefully you guys will keep writing the story. Now, I'd love if Jeff ends up being chosen by Biff to be his little brother at the frat so Biff can fuck the shit out of Jeff all the time! Actually, I just want to see Jeff getting fucked by Biff really. Please post some new chapters soon!
LongtimeFan
2/8/20, 1:55 AM
Wow. What an incredible story! Your writing style is absolutely top-notch, and the way you describe a frightened person in a changing world is second to none. The mysterious Company makes for a perfect villain, and the question at the end of the story--was J.D. Joe's true identity, temporarily overwritten by the group and restored by his old clothes, or did they write him a new personality after he was fired?--is a fascinating one. The mystery, plus the idea that this could actually happen, makes this truly remarkable. Well done...
Anonymous
2/8/20, 1:52 AM
like this dark atmosphere with detailed and occasionally poetic sensual descriptions!!
Anonymous
2/8/20, 1:24 AM
What an amazing story!!
Kyle Chu
2/8/20, 1:21 AM
"In-fucking-credible" is the best compliment I could've ever received. I'm glad I was able to deliver, Elan. Like I said before, I was really into your first chapter, and I'm a fan of yours in general that I just had to contribute to this story. I plan to continue this series moving forward. I hope you'll continue to give your blessing and I hope you will continue to like it.
2/8/20, 1:18 AM
Yes please. As much as I love a bottom dad, would it be a problem with the client if he goes like that? Shouldn't it be at least a tiny world modification with the device so his father can go like that?
2/8/20, 12:50 AM
In-fucking-credible. Took my idea and really ran with it.