Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/7/20, 11:03 AM
Please never stop writing Tkhon ! Your stories make me nut so Good!
Anonymous
2/7/20, 10:59 AM
next chapter please
2/7/20, 6:40 AM
i hope to see feet and bottom dad in the future <3
2/7/20, 6:16 AM
The idea is quite simple but the development is fascinating, I really liked it. I wish you worked on more chapters
hypnohoosier
2/7/20, 4:28 AM
I love the idea but as the previous comments said, it needs some serious proofreading/edits
Jake
2/7/20, 4:08 AM
Perhaps there could be a farm with other animals to join the chickens.
Anonymous
2/7/20, 2:54 AM
I really like that you're developing Pine's friendship with Stacy instead of burying the women! Glad to see some female representation with nuance behind it!
Anonymous
2/7/20, 2:30 AM
I think for diversity sake their should be a balance . I would make the father more dominant and dirty . Muscular bear type dominant using roids and have his cock shrink making him an very open power bottom. More on the dirty side. The elder son I would go for the jock hunk look. Massive while manageable dick and more on the exhibitionist side. Clearly in porn and escort service. Someone who is experience and over confidant in his sexual prowess and collect different toy, porn and is an explorer sexually . Also clearly dumb. The younger should be more of a twink I think closer to a shy nerd. Giving him glasses maybe a studder and beautiful innocent traits . Still smart but constantly push and tease by his older sibling with a hole that never feel right when empty.
Anonymous
2/7/20, 1:02 AM
Agree with above, gender plumbing swap are turn offs along with femmie
Anonymous
2/7/20, 12:44 AM
genitalia/gender swaps turn me off, so much. but this isn't my story, of course