Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/7/20, 2:30 AM
I think for diversity sake their should be a balance . I would make the father more dominant and dirty . Muscular bear type dominant using roids and have his cock shrink making him an very open power bottom. More on the dirty side. The elder son I would go for the jock hunk look. Massive while manageable dick and more on the exhibitionist side. Clearly in porn and escort service. Someone who is experience and over confidant in his sexual prowess and collect different toy, porn and is an explorer sexually . Also clearly dumb. The younger should be more of a twink I think closer to a shy nerd. Giving him glasses maybe a studder and beautiful innocent traits . Still smart but constantly push and tease by his older sibling with a hole that never feel right when empty.
Anonymous
2/7/20, 1:02 AM
Agree with above, gender plumbing swap are turn offs along with femmie
Anonymous
2/7/20, 12:44 AM
genitalia/gender swaps turn me off, so much. but this isn't my story, of course
nycboot
2/7/20, 12:41 AM
Great start!
2/6/20, 10:43 PM
Wonderful read; looking forward to the next part of the story!!
2/6/20, 10:42 PM
It think it's a great chapter; it really centers around Pine and Mike's friendship. The friendship has been changing over the stories; it started out with Pine being harassed by the football team and Mike feeling guilty about treating his best friend so badly; then it moved to Pine having control over Mike. They've worked through that and now are trying to rebuild the friendship they once had; here Mike tries to bring in a sexual dimension, but Pine ends up refusing it. I enjoy that part of the series; Pine and Mike are characters with dimensions to them and are changing as the story goes. It, along with the ways in which Pine brings the football team under his control, makes the story something I look forward to reading. So I say please keep doing what you're doing; I continue to wait to see the chapter of your story and where both Pine and Mikey go in it.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 10:22 PM
Since his son is the man of the house, I think it is reasonable to make his dad change to be his house wife. Like remains strong appearance but do every feminine stuff that house wife should really do. Would be really hot !
Anonymous
2/6/20, 10:00 PM
I loved this ! Please make more
Anonymous
2/6/20, 9:52 PM
dad as a bottom servant slave pls.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 9:37 PM
I loved this! Please make more