Recent Comments

2/6/20, 10:43 PM
Wonderful read; looking forward to the next part of the story!!
2/6/20, 10:42 PM
It think it's a great chapter; it really centers around Pine and Mike's friendship. The friendship has been changing over the stories; it started out with Pine being harassed by the football team and Mike feeling guilty about treating his best friend so badly; then it moved to Pine having control over Mike. They've worked through that and now are trying to rebuild the friendship they once had; here Mike tries to bring in a sexual dimension, but Pine ends up refusing it. I enjoy that part of the series; Pine and Mike are characters with dimensions to them and are changing as the story goes. It, along with the ways in which Pine brings the football team under his control, makes the story something I look forward to reading. So I say please keep doing what you're doing; I continue to wait to see the chapter of your story and where both Pine and Mikey go in it.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 10:22 PM
Since his son is the man of the house, I think it is reasonable to make his dad change to be his house wife. Like remains strong appearance but do every feminine stuff that house wife should really do. Would be really hot !
Anonymous
2/6/20, 10:00 PM
I loved this ! Please make more
Anonymous
2/6/20, 9:52 PM
dad as a bottom servant slave pls.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 9:37 PM
I loved this! Please make more
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/6/20, 9:01 PM
Talk about reading your fine print.
2/6/20, 8:53 PM
Super excited to stumble across this story after all these years! This was one of the first MC stories I ever read -- it turned me on so much, I printed a copy of it so I'd always have it. That's gotta be twenty years ago now... Still gets me. Great job.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/6/20, 8:03 PM
I like the idea of the step dad, maybe the mayor,
Anonymous
2/6/20, 7:41 PM
Mmm daddy being the bottom bitch is gonna be so hot. Love how they are so into the orders.