Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/6/20, 7:11 PM
Will this story ever be continued?
Elm
2/6/20, 6:41 PM
This story is turning out great! As I said in the first chapter (Of hopefully many to come!) I would love to see the father as more of a bottom/servant. As for bisexual themes... do what you want :) I will love it either way.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 6:29 PM
A lot of people are asking for really specific and kinky stuff. I think that you should stick to a baseline. And if you choose to include some of the more intense items they can be chapter specific. Or perhaps not to the exact and extreme degree some are asking for. As for the question on bisexual scenes I would vote against that. If they happened before a guy was turned then ok, but that's it for me. I'm all for transformations, especially muscle/penis growth, but I draw a hard line at gender/genitalia swapping. The choice is yours of course, and it will be nice to see what you write.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 6:25 PM
fuck it would be so hot if you began adding like a sexy jock step dad or boyfriends for the brothers in the mix to make it a full orgy.......
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/6/20, 5:56 PM
Any chance of getting a 100 percent pet dog into that blend please? Being hooded & wearing paws at all times, eating dog food, whole package.
nycboot
2/6/20, 5:53 PM
Weird and wonderful! I love how you have such a deadpan narration in describing everything. Lots of fun!
Anonymous
2/6/20, 5:51 PM
Very well written. Hadn't read a story like this before. Would love too see Chuck & the other chickens get some additional coverings to look more like chickens.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 5:41 PM
Very good start! Can't wait to read more!
Anonymous
2/6/20, 4:30 PM
The continuation of this story will be welcome IF the story doesn't become predictable. This is where the creative mind needs to go off the rails. Let's see what we end up with.
Anonymous
2/6/20, 4:26 PM
short but oh so hot!!!